Peer review

By showing the class are updated cut it helped us realise where we are and what we need to do to improve. By people unaware of what are project is about telling us how we could improve it has helped massively. One thing that we have changed after hearing the advice of offers is shortening the transition of flashback to when she starts panicking and searching for artefacts relating to her brother. What we realised was the slow build up into a sudden burst of action didn't really work so we have changed it accordingly. As well as giving constructive criticism we where also told what we had done well so we can try and make a consistent piece.